Hi Lochie, I like how you have explained lots about the rhino and why the poachers killed the rhinos. I also like how you have put in the corner STOP POACHERS!!!!! I thought that was pretty cool. This made me smile because you are thinking about more than just yourself. Next time I think you could put a bit more information into your writing.
Hi Lochie,
ReplyDeleteI like how you have explained lots about the rhino and why the poachers killed the rhinos. I also like how you have put in the corner STOP POACHERS!!!!! I thought that was pretty cool. This made me smile because you are thinking about more than just yourself. Next time I think you could put a bit more information into your writing.